Clubpenguincheat.com Halloween Contest 2008

[MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN]

Here is my story (im entering only because everyone at school says I right the best stories. Especially this kind)CAUTION! SOME MATERIAL IS NOT BASED FOR PEOPLE WITH FAINT OF HEART! fair warning:
Cpc's Month of the Bloodbath

One day, Chocolate123 saw Pan and JayZee talking.
"What's up guys?" she replies.
"Oh, hey Chocolate, we are planning to go have a party in the woods tonight." Pan replies with excitement.
"Awesome! I'm going to get ready for this!" Chocolate says running home.
Pan and JayZee find as many people as they can for the party. They told Admin, the mods, Juliat123, and well lots of users.
That night was Halloween and the began going into to the woods.
"Woohoo, I'm excited! But wait, where is MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN?" Penganator says.
"Who cares, it's his loss that he didn't come." PinkKirby says.
They hear a scream. Juliat got scared and ran. Xtreme22 ran after her.
"Juliat wait come back!" He says.
They run but then she trips. He helps her up. They begin to walk back. A long machete comes and goes threw Juliat's head.
"AHHH!!" X screams.
The guy comes up and grabs the machete. X was so shocked he couldn't move. He was sliced up until he was nothing but chunks!
"I wonder if they are ok." Darren says.
"Ok we have to search for them so lets get into groups," Chocolate says sounding like a leader, "Admin, Basim, Penganator, and Penguingirl are one group. Pan, JayZee, Darren, and Katelynn are another. Finally, PinkKirby, Fred the Cat, and me are the last group."
Everyone agreed and went their separate ways.
"I'm scared guys, what is something bad happened?" Penguingirl says staring into the bloody moon.
"Don't worry...I...will..." Penganator begins to say but sees a guy running after the four.
They began to run another way. Vines fall down and hook onto Basim and Admin. They fly up into the air. Penguingirl and Penganator were out of sight.
He came up and cut them down. They were still wrapped up though. He cuts threw like a crazy chainsaw making blood and guts fly everywhere. Admin got up and ran with one of his arms off. Basim was a goner, X, Juliat and him were now dead.
Penguingirl and Penganator ran into a house. They found Pan and Katelynn.
"Where is Darren and JayZee?" they ask.
"Running from a psycho killer.
"Yeah well that psycho killer killed Basim, X, and Juliat!" Penguingirl says back.
Darren and JayZee are still running. They run into Admin.
"Where is your arm?" they ask.
But then, JayZee and Darren get cut up and looked disgusting. Admin runs for the house.
PinkKirby and them bagan to wonder what was going on.
"Hmm it seems we haven't seen anybody." Fred says.
"Interesting... I wonder if they are tricking us." Chocolate says.
"What are we going to do Admin?" Penganator says.
"I'm panicing and I have no clue!" Admin shot back.
PinkKirby, Chocolate, and Fred saw the house. They started walking towards it. Penguingirl looked out the window.
"Guys look out he is behind you!" she screams at them.
They turn around. He picks PinkKriby up and cuts his arms off. Just as his head was about to get cut off, Fred jumped in the way and his neck was cut open with blood spraying everywhere. Chocolate grabbed PinkKirby and ran in the house. The door was locked.

"Unlock the door!" she screams.
The do but she let go off PinkKirby by accident. They shut the door and locked it. Well, I will just say it was bye-bye PinkKirby.

He started hitting the door with the machete. Admin grabbed a gas container and poured it everywhere.
"What are you doing?" they asked.
"He is going to get in here so we have to burn him!" He screams.
Everyone searches for matches. Penganator finds them.
"But wait someone will have to sacrifice themself. To set it on fire. Who will do it?" Penguingirl replies with anger.
"Everyone out the back door I'm doing it!" says Admin.

Penguingirl, Pan, and Katelynn ran out. Penganator stood there. He got in.
"Its just you and me!" Admin says.
To show he was wrong the guy threw the machete at a gas tank and blew up the house with Penganator in it. He knew he would die but he wanted 2 more dead.

"Penganator was still in there!" Penguingirl says crying.
They start walking away. But the vines that were set as traps were still out there. Katelynn walked forward. Vines grabbed her and sqeezed her until she popped open.

"Oh my gosh, lets go!" Pan says.
Penguingirl and Pan begin to run dodging vines but then a vine picks up Pan and squeezes. Penguingirl tries to get her loose but was picked up by others. They ended up like Katelynn.
2 hours later...
MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN and Lizelia show up by the woods.
"Man I hope this was the right time to meet them." Lizelia says.
"Yeah, I don't wanna be late." MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN replies back.
They begin walking in. Then they hear a sound in the trees. Vines fall and pick them up.
"Let go of me!" Lizelia says but died.
"NO!! Let go wait AHHHH...ugh..."
THE END or is it...
The very next day MemyselfandI was walking down the street. She was supposed to meet up with Brokstr. She was at the snow forts. She saw Gofeball and...and Admin.
"Hey guys what's up?" she asked.
"Well,Admin just said last night over in the forest, somebody tried to kill everyone. Whoever it was succeeded, but apparently Admin made it out before a igloo blew up." Gofeball replies in shock.
There was a long pause. As long and the Mississippi River.
"But, also I saw that the killer made it out with me." Admin said.
They saw Brokstr in the clearing. They told him the story.
"So thats why you have bloodstains on your hands?" Brokstr said.
"Ugh yeah." Admin said.
Brokstr became suspicious. He thought, Is this even Admin? He is acting all kind of strange. Gofeball and MeMyselfandI thought the same.
"Let's go to the dock. No one goes there this early." Gofeball replies.
They begin walking with Brokstr and Admin in the front.
"He is acting weird, I'm not sure who this is." Gofeball says scared.
They arrive at the Dock. Brokstr and Admin go out on the Dock by the boat. Gofeball and MeMyselfAndI stayed back by the trees.
All of a sudden, Admin pulls out a bag and throws it over Brokstr's head. He ties it around his neck soeriously tight. He ties his arms together and then throws him overboard. Gofeball and MeMyselfAndI began running towards the water but stop. Admin pulls out THE machete (from the night before) and throws it at Brokstr's head.
They run to the Lighthouse and find Baller, Hydrin, and Tcgirl inside. They locked the door.
“Head for the Beacon everyone!” Gofeball yelled.
They ran up there. Gofeball and MeMyselfAndI explained what happened to them.
SLAM! RIP! CRUNCH! He opened the door and was coming up the steps.
“Look a jetpack! One could take it and another could hold on to the others feet!” Tcgirl exclaimed.
Hydrin grabbed the jetpack and put it on. He grabbed baller and forced him to hang on to his feet. They began to leave.
“See you later, we will hide.” MeMyselfAndI said.
They hid behind the light. Admin came up. He saw Hydrin and baller. He trew his machete at the jetpack and it blew up. Tcgirl, MeMyselfAndI, and Gofeball ran to him.
"WHO ARE YOU!?" they demanded.
"I am the killer from the Forest. I am Admin. That killer thought they were my henchmen. I am the real killer. You 3 are going to die!" He exclaimed.
The ran to the Ski Village. Tcgirl saw his machete on the ground. She picked it up and ran behind the tour guide sign. Gofeball and MeMyselfAndI looked around. He came around the corner running. Tcgirl ran after him and stabbed him in the chest. He pulled it out and cut her head off. They fell and blood was all over Gofeball and MeMyselfAndI.
"NO!! TCGIRL!" Gofeball said.
"Gofeballcome on!" She replied. They ran. Admin (still barely alive) picked up the machete and threw it. It hit Gofeball in the side of the stomach and MeMyselfAndI in the leg.
"No don't die on me!" She said.
Sadly, Gofeball bled to death. She picked up the machete and cut Admin up.
"Im made it. I killed Admin. He killed everyone. But what am I supposed to do now?" she said.
She put the hand part threw his chest and kept it there. She turned around and a snowball hit her in the head. She fell backwards and landed on the machete. It went through her chest. Now EVERYONE from this story was dead.
THE END (literally)
I hope you liked the story Admin. And everyone else. I think it's good but that's just my opinion... plus it was kind of long. Oh well, there you have it, my story made up. I told you it wasn't for the faint of heart.

[Pan]

It was October 31, morning. Juliat123 had already woke up. She was very excited because she had been waiting for Halloween for ages. She couldn't decide her costume, so she phoned Admin to ask him what costume he liked the best. There was no answer. Julat123 thought he was sleeping, because it was early morning. She tried phoning MeMyselfAndI, but there wasn't answer either. Juliat123 thought the same. So she phoned Pan, because she knew Pan always gets up early, specially on special days as Halloween.

-Hi Pan!
-What's up Juliat?
-Well I was calling you because I can't decide what costume to wear this night!
-Oh, I see... Which ones do you have?
-Well, I've got the Bee costume, the Clown costume and the Pink Princess one. But I don't want to use this last one because I used it last year, so which one do you prefer? Bee or Clown?
-I would saw clo...

There was a pause. A long pause.

-Pan? Are you there, Pan?

...

Juliat started to feel worried.

-Pan?!

She clang the phone (I don't know the word in english, "colgar" SORRY!)
She ran to Pan's igloo still wearing her pajamas. When she got there she saw a note pasted on the door. Juliat read it, it was like this:

"Troopa eeka trebba greeba!!!"

Juliat gave a short scream. She suspected what was going on.
She ran to MeMyselfAndI's igloo and knocked the door. No answer. She knocked again and again and again and suddenly, a green penguin came out.

-What's going on out here?!
-MeMyselfAndI! You've got to hel...
-Hey! You woke me up Juliat! Didn't I tell you I love to sleep and I hate being disturbed, don't you...!
-HEY!!! YOU'VE GOT TO LISTEN TO ME! I THINK SOMETHING BAD HAPPENED TO PAN! HURRY! FOLLOW ME!!!

MeMyselfAndI followed Juliat without saying a thing. She knew something really weird was happening because Juliat never yells like that.
They went to Admin's igloo. They knocked the door. Nothing. They screamed, they shouted they made elephant noises. Still nothing.
They deduced that Admin wasn't home that time.
They went to the Pizza Parlor, to the Cove, to the Dance Club looking for him. But they couldn't find him.

Juliat and MeMyselfAndI went to Pan's igloo.
Nothing had changed since Juliat was there earlier, but this time they could listen something from inside the igloo. It was Admin's voice!

Nor MeMyselfAndI nor Juliat understood what was going on.
Juliat phoned MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN with her cellphone, calling for help. MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN arrived Pan's igloo 10 minutes later.

-What's going on?!
-Admin and Pan are inside there and Admin is acting really weird! Said MeMyselfAndI
-Yeah! Look at this note over here!

MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN read the note.

-Why don't we go in? He said.
-It's closed, we can't! Said Juliat.

MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN made a hole on the door with his beack.
The girls gasped.

They all came in. They didn't see anything weird. Only an empty igloo.

-They might be at the kitchen! Said MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN

The three penguins went to the kitchen and they saw Pan and Admin. Pan was inside something that looked like a portatil jail and Admin was holding the phone Pan had this morning when she talked to Juliat. And he was screaming at Pan. They weren't english words, it sounded like an outer space language.

-What are you doing Admin?! Said MeMyselfAndI

Admin realized that MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN, Juliat and MeMyselfAndI had come. He made a howler monkey yell and caught them all. He put them inside the portatil jail with Pan.

-Oh my! What is wrong with you Admin?! That's not you! Juliat cried.

Admin laughed meanly and then rushed out the igloo.

-What are we going to do? Said MeMyselfAndI
-This is weird... Really weird! MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN answered.

Pan didn't say a thing. She was thinking. Thinking hard.
There was a long silence and then she said.

-That's not Admin.

-What? Juliat, MeMyselfAndI and MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN said.

-That's not him...

Silence. Thinking. Meditating.

-That's an outer space creature that got inside Admin's body.
-Really?! Said MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN.
-Yes. I understand his language. It's called Geekoki.
-Huh? Said MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN, that still wasn't understanding.
-What did it say Pan?! Tell us everything it said! MeMyselfAndI said.
- If I don't remember wrong, it was something like "Gocky maloki golly belly trobalty! Come come Hame Helika Crabba! Wat wat wat wat wat!!!" Which means "Penguins can't beat Geekokis!
Now I have controlled Admin, you are completely lost ha ha ha ha ha!!!

The other three gasped: Oh!

-The first thing we got to do is get out of here.

MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN used his beack skills and broke the jail.

-Let's go! He said.

They all ran, following Admin's feet marks that were on the snow till they got to the Clock Tower at the Snow Forts.
Admin was at the top of it, screaming "Trobalty! Trobalty! Trobalty! Trobalty!" That means "Gekoki!"

-We need a plan. Said Juliat. How do we stop Geekoki people?
-Hmmmm.... Pan thought. Well, my Geekoki teacher once told me that they hate colour red. I never understood why, but she told me that if they see red, they would go crazy and faint.
-Great! Let's get some red stuff then! Said Juliat.

They all went around Club Penguin collecting red stuff. When they collected enough things, they went back to the Snow Forts.

-Look what I found guys. Said MeMyselfAndI, showing a huge red shell.
-Awesome! Where did you get it? Said MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN.
-It was at the cove there was also a beautifull green one with...
-Guys! We must hurry! Said Juliat.

Pan giggled.

-Maloky eeky montaloby! Wat wat! Gerby bogally emberate!
Pan said in Geekoki, refering to Admin.
Then they all showed their red things to the monster.

-Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh!!! Cried Admin, and fainted. Something like a ghost came out of his body and dissapeared on the air.
-Are you ok Admin? Said MeMyselfAndI, going where he had fell.
Admin opened his eyes slowly.
-Ouch man... What a horrible headache... What am I doing here? I don't like the Snow Forts.

Juliat, MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN, Pan and MeMyselfAndI told Admin the whole story.
At night, when the Halloween Party had finished, they all dreamed about this strange happening...

The End.

I hope you like it Admin!

[gofeball]

IM GONNA CALL MINE THE CP SCARE

one night admin was walking on cp on Halloween trick or treating,and he found a nice house to trick or treat at.so he went inside.he noticed no one was inside.so he got scared.then,he saw someone run.he said "hello?".there was no respond.he looked behind a pot.Behind the pot he saw a witch! she tried to get him but he was too fast.then,she cursed him.the next night he went to his grandmother's house.before he go there he saw the witch again since he was cursed he could not flee. Now no one nows what happened to admin.some say he turned into a witch.others say he died



PS.U ROCK ADMIN

[Piglywink]

Ok i will enter.My story is called MIDNIGHT
It was the day before halloween the sig makers were working hard to make a halloween banner and some later sig orders.Sky Penguingirl and Piglywink finished up the banner just in time for penguin school.Pigly grabed her cell phone and bag and waddled to polar bear.While wadling Piglywink phoned sky She waited and waited but no answer then finally she heard a
*Sky:Hello
*Hi a
but then she was inturuped
*this is skyebales answering macheen please leave a message after the beep.BEEEP
*hmm weird she always answers said piglywink flipping her phone in her flippers.
She saw admin in the distence and waved.Sky wasent at school today pigly said to admin.Thats weird replyed admin she was on all lastnight posting" GANA GET YA GONNA GET YA" MAYBE SHE WAS TIERD FROM POSTING?pigly said worrriedWell il check her iggt as soon as im done my last sig order.

As promissed piglywink went to check on skybaleThere was no answer at the door so pigly called penguin girl

Ello?
Hi penguin girl
Hi?
Im at skyebales house theres no answer she wasent at school an....
WOW SLOW DOWN im sure shes alright i will be right over.
CLick

Sudenly the door swang open and admin was inside. ADMIN?! screamed a voice from behinde piglywink Pigly SCREAMED she tured around to see penguin girl o its just you.
Admin is sky alright?I dont know.They checked sky and took car of her then at midnight BAM SKY ROSE AND SAID GET OUT OF THE HOUSE
WE SCREAMED AND RAN THE DOOR SLAMED INFRONT OF US.OWIE.THEN NIVES FLEW EVERY WHERE WE DOGED THEM BUT SILL WERE SCARED.OMG IT WAS SCARY! IT ALL HAPPEND FOR A MINUTE THEN it was quite then the door flew open .it started to thunder shower .I t was skyebale GET OUT OF THE HOUSE SHE SCREAMED!THATS A MURDER!WE RAN ACROSS THE ISLAND tHEN LOST TRACK OF ADMIN. WHERE they breathed? then Penguin girll fell of the mountainThey tried to grab her but it was too late.Its just ..... piglywink turned around to see sky hanging from the ski lift it was 1:00 piglywinks mouth opened wide as the mountian started to spin.Then she fainted.Then se woke up in her igloo with admin skyebale pengirl. What happened? Murmered admin they woke up to see a ghoust rise out of the house.Then they all dressed for halloween and went tricker treating promising never to tell the story to any one else.
The end hope ya like it!~

[Nospicker/darrenxkatelynn]

Originally Posted by MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN

Here is my story (im entering only because everyone at school says I right the best stories. Especially this kind)CAUTION! SOME MATERIAL IS NOT BASED FOR PEOPLE WITH FAINT OF HEART! fair warning:
Cpc's Month of the Bloodbath

One day, Chocolate123 saw Pan and JayZee talking.
"What's up guys?" she replies.
"Oh, hey Chocolate, we are planning to go have a party in the woods tonight." Pan replies with excitement.
"Awesome! I'm going to get ready for this!" Chocolate says running home.
Pan and JayZee find as many people as they can for the party. They told Admin, the mods, Juliat123, and well lots of users.
That night was Halloween and the began going into to the woods.
"Woohoo, I'm excited! But wait, where is MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN?" Penganator says.
"Who cares, it's his loss that he didn't come." PinkKirby says.
They hear a scream. Juliat got scared and ran. Xtreme22 ran after her.
"Juliat wait come back!" He says.
They run but then she trips. He helps her up. They begin to walk back. A long machete comes and goes threw Juliat's head.
"AHHH!!" X screams.
The guy comes up and grabs the machete. X was so shocked he couldn't move. He was sliced up until he was nothing but chunks!
"I wonder if they are ok." Darren says.
"Ok we have to search for them so lets get into groups," Chocolate says sounding like a leader, "Admin, Basim, Penganator, and Penguingirl are one group. Pan, JayZee, Darren, and Katelynn are another. Finally, PinkKirby, Fred the Cat, and me are the last group."
Everyone agreed and went their separate ways.
"I'm scared guys, what is something bad happened?" Penguingirl says staring into the bloody moon.
"Don't worry...I...will..." Penganator begins to say but sees a guy running after the four.
They began to run another way. Vines fall down and hook onto Basim and Admin. They fly up into the air. Penguingirl and Penganator were out of sight.
He came up and cut them down. They were still wrapped up though. He cuts threw like a crazy chainsaw making blood and guts fly everywhere. Admin got up and ran with one of his arms off. Basim was a goner, X, Juliat and him were now dead.
Penguingirl and Penganator ran into a house. They found Pan and Katelynn.
"Where is Darren and JayZee?" they ask.
"Running from a psycho killer.
"Yeah well that psycho killer killed Basim, X, and Juliat!" Penguingirl says back.
Darren and JayZee are still running. They run into Admin.
"Where is your arm?" they ask.
But then, JayZee and Darren get cut up and looked disgusting. Admin runs for the house.
PinkKirby and them bagan to wonder what was going on.
"Hmm it seems we haven't seen anybody." Fred says.
"Interesting... I wonder if they are tricking us." Chocolate says.
"What are we going to do Admin?" Penganator says.
"I'm panicing and I have no clue!" Admin shot back.
PinkKirby, Chocolate, and Fred saw the house. They started walking towards it. Penguingirl looked out the window.
"Guys look out he is behind you!" she screams at them.
They turn around. He picks PinkKriby up and cuts his arms off. Just as his head was about to get cut off, Fred jumped in the way and his neck was cut open with blood spraying everywhere. Chocolate grabbed PinkKirby and ran in the house. The door was locked.

"Unlock the door!" she screams.
The do but she let go off PinkKirby by accident. They shut the door and locked it. Well, I will just say it was bye-bye PinkKirby.

He started hitting the door with the machete. Admin grabbed a gas container and poured it everywhere.
"What are you doing?" they asked.
"He is going to get in here so we have to burn him!" He screams.
Everyone searches for matches. Penganator finds them.
"But wait someone will have to sacrifice themself. To set it on fire. Who will do it?" Penguingirl replies with anger.
"Everyone out the back door I'm doing it!" says Admin.

Penguingirl, Pan, and Katelynn ran out. Penganator stood there. He got in.
"Its just you and me!" Admin says.
To show he was wrong the guy threw the machete at a gas tank and blew up the house with Penganator in it. He knew he would die but he wanted 2 more dead.

"Penganator was still in there!" Penguingirl says crying.
They start walking away. But the vines that were set as traps were still out there. Katelynn walked forward. Vines grabbed her and sqeezed her until she popped open.

"Oh my gosh, lets go!" Pan says.
Penguingirl and Pan begin to run dodging vines but then a vine picks up Pan and squeezes. Penguingirl tries to get her loose but was picked up by others. They ended up like Katelynn.
2 hours later...
MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN and Lizelia show up by the woods.
"Man I hope this was the right time to meet them." Lizelia says.
"Yeah, I don't wanna be late." MYSTERIOUS PENGUIN replies back.
They begin walking in. Then they hear a sound in the trees. Vines fall and pick them up.
"Let go of me!" Lizelia says but died.
"NO!! Let go wait AHHHH...ugh..."
THE END
I hope you liked the story Admin. And everyone else. I think it's good but that's just y opinion... plus it was kind of long. Oh well, there you have it, my story made up. I told you it wasn't for the faint of heart.

wtf! did i die?

My story

Halloween Night

Based on a fake story

it was a dark and stormy night, in the house of the Halbartschlagers. Admin and PET were in there room playing a game of Chess. Suddenly, the pieces started moving by themselves. They heard a spooky noise. Itsaying "Aaaaaadmin, PEEEEETTT. I've come for youuuuu". The boys were freaked! Since they are only in the age range from 20-21 they started booking it!(running as fast as possible FYI) But PET fell out of the window (10 floor mansion) on the 9th floor! Admin screamed at the top of his lungs for help.
So he ran back to his room and grabbed his laptop and ran to his car. he called Eduardo to drive him (cuz he forgot his keys at Eduardos house). While she was driving him, Admin used his comp to get on CPC.He lgged into his account and went to the admin panel. He went to the destroy and delete section. It gave him an option, "Eliminate Ghosts?" was one of the buttons. He clicked it. "Are you sure u want to eliminate the ghosts?" his comp said. Admin clicked Yes. So his computor said again "If u do this all ghosts will be eliminated. Would you like to continue?" he click Yes.. so this went on for 5-10 minutes. Finally he eliminted the ghosts... but it didnt work!... because when he was in the car Brokstr was saying to him that it was all a prank... the ghost was Xtreme22 hiding in the closet trying to trick them... when PET fell he landed in the backyard pool...! It was all set up as a Halloween prank from PET and his CPC.

A Darren Cronover Original

[JayZee]

my story:

That Night The Horror Based Night

One night exactly on Devil's Night this boy named Admin was afraid of Halloween. He was scared to death on it well what do you expect he believes this. He thought it was all real kids in his school teased him. Every Devil's night in his imagination there is Halloween creatures in his house. So he sleeps in his attic shuts the door and trys to sleep there. This Devil's night he's not doing that. He plans to show everyone he can sleep outside. Does he? Yes he does and is afraid to death. Everyone still laughs at him because he is sleeping in his front yard. Admin thinks that all the dead bodies really do come back alive on Halloween and they try to haunt him. His parents think he is "kinda stupid headed" because his imagination. So he trys to go and hide in the bushes but then he screams the whole night, because in the bushes there really is the creatures he imagined. He saw a Werewolf, a real Ghost,some Goblins, and a few Witches. His parents looked at them at started digging down to china. Admin rushed down to his ONLY friend Eduardo's house. Eduardo thought first it was in his imagination but then the Goblins started hitting him with an axe, so he ran as fast as he could but the Goblims just chopped him into pieces he was screaming the whole time till he heard his mom. "Hey Admin what are you doing out there?" Now he figured out it was all a dream and started laughing. Eduardo was then laughing aswell when he heard it too.

The End

[eduardo]

WARNING THIS STORY CONTAINS SUCK UPNESS :P

Once upon a time...
There was a devishly handsome dude, his name was Admin. One day as he was walking down a street, as he approached an old abandoned mansion, his cell-phone rings... There was a woman's voice on the other side of the phone.

"Hi" The woman said."Turn around..." And the phone hang up.
Admin was scared. Suddenly, he hears crackling behind him.
Admin turns around to see a dark shadowy figure.

"Who are you?" Admin asks.
The figure suddenly says "Keventor Goulphrie Melenko!"
Admin had an odd pain in his stumich and was turned into a mouse! He sees the shadowy figure grab him, and suddenly passes out.

Admin wakes up, to find himself stuck in a damp scary closet. The curse must have left, as he was back into human form. The walls were oozing with gunky slime. As admin was catching his breath, a white glowing sphere appears infront of him.

"Hello. My name is Ahrim, It Said, I was cursed once by the same figure. Follow me if you want to live."

Admin follows Ahrim down the stairs to the hall, where they confront the figure again.

"You little mischevious fools!" "Now that I have you cornered... Im going to finish you off!" "Excelsior Magento..." The Witch Chants.

"Take this!, Keventor! Goulphrie! Melenko!!!" Admin says, remembering the spell the witch used on him.

"AAAAAAAAH!!!!" The witch screams as she is shrunken into a mouse.
"Thank you, you have lifted the curse put on me..." Ahrim says as he slowly dissapears...

1 YEAR LATER

Admin walks down the same street as before...
When he hears his phone ring.
"Hi." A woman says. "Turn around..."

THE END...?

[Luna Lovegood]

Here's my attempt, Hope I win and hope you all like it. =)

When Admin got up from his afternoon nap he got right on his computer to check CPC. Everything looked normal, except for the fact he was the only one online. Confused he checked the chatbox everyone usualy used. Nothing. He went back onto CPC and checked out a few user profiles, no one was banned? So why was no one there? Now even more confused he logged back onto CPC and his printer started up. The first sheet was all red. The second was all red and wet. He picked this one up and found the printer was printing with blood! A bit scared he looked back at the computer, he had a private message. He clicked and read it.

Watch your back.

At that verry moment Admin heard the floor creaking downstairs. Grabbing an old baseball bat from a corner he went down to look. Going quietly down the stairs he peeked around the corner and seen bloody footprints on the floor heading twords his kitchen,and the noise of an electric kitchen knife. Now more afraid then ever he headed to the kitchen. Admin walked into the kitchen and seen his electric knife on, on the kitchen table and no one in sight. He heard somthing in another room and walked slowly twords it. What was around the corner? What could be making that noise? MEOW! He stepped on the black cats tail and his heart jumped into his throat. For a moment he thought of releife, it had only been the cat. But then he rememberd that a cat can't plug in an electc knife or make those foot prints. He went back to the kitchen to check out the footprints. He followed the bloody footprints outside and let out a terrible yell when he seen the bloody mess that lay on his front steps. He looked around quickly wide eyed. Admin turned and let out a loud scream of terror when he heard a chainsaw.
The End.

Jeeze...This has got to be the best story I've ever written!
I mostly stick to poems...

It's either my best or my worst I'm not sure yet. lol

**May edit out a part or two later, I'm not totaly sure if I like it yet.**

[Bigbirdy234]

WOW! Nice one, Luna! 10/10

Once, there was a girl named Caroline She would always go on walks with her dog, spark. One day she was walking in the woods. She had found some red substances on the way back home, it was too late. It was already nightfall! She layed down on a log under a tree. She found something dripping on her shirt. It was blood!!! She screamed and a man with a rifle caught her screaming

After that...you wouldn't dare to listen to the rest of the story. About 5 years later, their family moved out because they couldn't find Caroline's body. A year later, another family moves in. They we're the one who had found her body. they stuffed her into a bag and then put the remains of her in a fire. It wasn't a pretty sight

Hmm...I like scary stories but I don't know if its good

I hope I win

[Frost258]

there was a scary howling from the shadows,the shadows would take your shadow then come for you!, this is where it begins. One day a boy called Frost came to town with his friend Admin, they saw a shadow on the floor, but the shadow was coming from nowhere, Admin stepped into the shadow, "NO!" shouted Frost but Admin didn't listen Admin's shadow just disappeared then Admin disappeared, Frost ran for his life, but before he could say anything everyones shadow DISSAPPEARED! Then they disappeared A black ghost rised from the ground it was a shadow ghost! it shouted "WOOOOOOOOO!" then i just ran faster, Crenga appeared from nowhere and had a vacuum cleaner he turned it on and sucked up the ghost! "NO!" screamed the ghost whilst being vacuuumed up
The End

hope you like it