September 2009 CPCM

[Inlovemonkey]

Very good article!
I like the site

[MeMyselfAndI]

Very good article!!! Good job guys!!!

[Bigbirdy234]

Originally Posted by Hnk999

Good, but not their best. I kinda am not a fan of how people have commented on this article. Just 'Wow! That's a great article!' isn't really enough. I don't know about the writers but when I write poems I don't just want a little 'Wow! It's a good poem!'. No, I want someone to tell me WHY they like it and what the bad points were and what the good points were. No one has mentioned the good or bad points on this article, I see, so I'll tell you what I thought were the good points and what were the bad points.

The Club Penguin updates have never been my favorite parts of any of the CPCM articles. I personally hate how many times the exclamation mark is used and the way it's written reminds of how a certain CP mod writes his blog posts. A CP mod I and my friends despise: Billybob. That part of the article always seemed too light and happy and 'Wow! Isn't that great!?' just like Billybob's articles and is the only part of the paper that could ever make me roll my eyes. Some people may like it but I personally don't. Too happy for me although I have nothing against happiness and have actually been very much content with my life and myself. The thing I liked about the article was that it covered everything new in CP and didn't leave a thing out. The pictures were also great too. ^.^ Of course, some of them were from the blog itself.

I didn't like the gnome choice that the CP users made. It makes me think they were color blind. .___. XD! However, I'll have to deal with the gnome costume that I personally think looks bad. Oh well, that's just life. *shrugs* Gnome costumes and penguins. O.o

The conclusion? I'm guessing that because of the delay that the conclusion couldn't be added so the paper had do without it.

The updates on real world and cpc... It was kinda mismatched. I notice that it starts mentioning what Kenye West did and then shows the video and then just skips to something about H1N1 - Swine Flu - when swine flu was mentioned in the second paragraph above. That made me wonder,'Hold on, what is it talking about?' Then I noticed what it meant.

The 9/11 Article By Choco... was tearful for me. It reminded me of the 9/11 video I had watched and all of a sudden I felt sad. However, it was still a nice article. But I noticed that in the beginning of the second paragraph she mentioned that all of the people in the planes had died and then in the end of the paragraph she mentioned it again. I also kinda didn't like how the second paragraph was written. Some things seemed to need to be switched around to make it work better but I still liked it. My second favorite part of this article of the CPCM.

My favorite part of the paper, CP ratings, wasn't in there. I always liked how it was written but it's okay that it wasn't in there. You were delayed and it's fine. Heck, we're lucky we got the paper at all.

My favorite part of this paper was the awards. I have to say congratulations to Toast because her signature is cute and unique and deserved to win. ^.^ Cloe did seem nice this month, right? I wasn't really paying attention so I didn't notice. ^.^;;;; Cat did deserve what she got because she is nice at making erm... graphics? Lol I skimmed that part over again, sorry. I can't remember the threads posted by Rach or MAI so I'll just have to look at it again but I know they deserved it. Only the deserving get the awards.

Well, that's what I thought. Sorry for it being so long. There was a lot to say about each part of it.

Originally Posted by Hnk999

? Um... I think it was a bit mismatched. Oh well, it took you a long time to get it in. *wrinkles nose* The first gnome just looks tacky and trampy. I mean, gray with bright blue, dark red, and GREEN? That is just tacky to me. .___. Oh well, not my fault if some people don't have the same opinion as mine. Well, I think Toast did deserve it. It was a nice sig that she had. *looks at user of the month* Meh... I know I'm never getting that. It always has to do with helping people and I personally think people are too dependent on the help of others so I don't really help out others that much. I like seeing them do it themselves. It's more rewarding anyway. Well, I wasn't a fan of this issue. I did really like the last one though.

Hnk, they worked hard on this. Can't you just keep these kinds of complaints to yourself? Of course you know why they posted it late; they were EDITING it for the best results. Yea, Toast deserved it, but what about the others? Plus littlebit writes these articles. She did an awesome job. A good writer always stays positive!!!!!!!!! So thats why they use those exclamation marks.
Be nice! Its a virtue of goodness!
Common sense! Back to topic:
Nice job guys. Loved this CPCM

[Hnk999]

Originally Posted by Bigbirdy234

Hnk, they worked hard on this. Can't you just keep these kinds of complaints to yourself? Of course you know why they posted it late; they were EDITING it for the best results. Yea, Toast deserved it, but what about the others? Plus littlebit writes these articles. She did an awesome job. A good writer always stays positive!!!!!!!!! So thats why they use those exclamation marks.
Be nice! Its a virtue of goodness!
Common sense! Back to topic:
Nice job guys. Loved this CPCM

It's either that or just put a 'Wow! That's great!' which doesn't really tell you about it. It wasn't just complaints. I was saying what I liked, what I didn't like. Plus, I was OKAY with it being mismatched. It was late so I was okay with it. Also, positive is just great but what about being realistic too? Not an insult. Just saying. P.S. Your comment offended me. I wasn't insulting them or complaining.

[Chocolate123]

Originally Posted by Hnk999

It's either that or just put a 'Wow! That's great!' which doesn't really tell you about it. It wasn't just complaints. I was saying what I liked, what I didn't like. Plus, I was OKAY with it being mismatched. It was late so I was okay with it. Also, positive is just great but what about being realistic too? Not an insult. Just saying. P.S. Your comment offended me. I wasn't insulting them or complaining.

You don't think its insulting, but it kinda offended me a little bit. I worked so freaking hard on that article.

Good job guys. Nice job awards person ;D. Gratz too all the winners. You guys should be proud we even have a paper. Good job other people. Also thanks for your comments. Octobers will be better we promise.

Overall not the best, but pretty good.

[Littlebit913]

Originally Posted by Bigbirdy234

Hnk, they worked hard on this. Can't you just keep these kinds of complaints to yourself? Of course you know why they posted it late; they were EDITING it for the best results. Yea, Toast deserved it, but what about the others? Plus littlebit writes these articles. She did an awesome job. A good writer always stays positive!!!!!!!!! So thats why they use those exclamation marks.
Be nice! Its a virtue of goodness!
Common sense! Back to topic:
Nice job guys. Loved this CPCM

Sorry for bumping topics, but I just have to say this... I didn't write the Cp Updates article this time. But thanks for looking on the brightside!