Meteore (Part 2)

[Jweezy]

(Hey guys, best thing to do is read Meteore (Part 1) before you read Meteore (Part 2))


Tuesday
2 days later...

When Christopher woke up from his deep, deep sleep. He yawned, got out of bed, brushed his teeth, and went downstairs to see what was for breakfast. He saw his sister playing with her yo-yo (as usual) and Ma was making waffles. "Hey sweetie, sit down at the table and I will get you your breakfast made", said Ma. So Christopher sat down at the table, but then all of a sudden, he remembered something...the meteore!!!

Christopher did not want his little sister, Christina, hear what he was about to say to Ma, so he asked to talk to her in private. When Ma and Christopher were in private Christopher said "Hey Ma, did you tell Christina about the meteore going to hit Earth yet?". Christopher could tell by the look on Ma's face that she didn't want to discuss it. "Well, honey, we do not want to tell her because she is a little 7 year old and we do not want to break her heart!" Christopher knew how Ma felt but he didn't care if his sister was 3 years old, he was going to tell her the truth!

"Christina, I think that there is something that I think you need to know. Pa, Ma, and I, were watching the Fox 4 News and Tyler Travis, the news reporter, said that they get a report from the scientists that a meteore was going to hit planet Earth in five days. But since today is Tuesday we only have 3 more days left until this meteore hits Earth!!"

"Christoper Lucas!", called Ma. When Ma calls Christopher by his last name, he knows he is in trouble...big time! "Christopher eat your breakfast and I do not want to hear another word come from you mouth again, do understand me Mr.?" Christopher nodded his head as he tried not to cry. "Yes Ma, I understand."

By the end of the day Pa was coming home from work. Christopher knew that Ma was going to tell Pa about what he told Christina, so he just stared at his shoes.

When Ma walked over to Pa, she gave him a kiss hello, and then they started whispering. And then Pa's face started to turn redder and redder by almost every word that Ma said.

"CHRISTOPHER MATTHEW LUCAS, YOU COME HERE RIGHT NOW!!!" Christopher knew that he was going to get grounded. "Christopher, Christopher, Christopher, what am I going to do with you?"

Christopher couldn't take it anymore. "PA I JUST WANTED TO TELL CHRISTINA THE TRUTH. THAT IS WHAT YOU AND MA ALWAYS TELL ME TO DO IS TO BE TRUTHFUL, SO I WAS...AND NOW I AM GETTING PUNISHED FOR DOING SOMETHING THAT YOU TOLD ME TO DO??" Christopher said as tears filled his eyes while he ran upstairs to his room and slammed the door.

He was also upset about the meteore coming in just 3 days...

(I hope you liked the story Meteore (Part 2). If you haven't read Meteore (Part 1) then you should because it will make a whole lot more sense. Well, please rate this story and comment on it. But please, no rude, ugly, comments.)

Thursday
2 days later...

~Jweezy~

[aaaphil]

100/100
I cant wait till part 3 get out because that the 2 first parts wher very interesting

[Jweezy]

Thank you aaaphil...that was very nice of you to say!

~Jweezy~

[Tunog]

I can't wait for part three to come out!

[Jweezy]

Part 3 should be coming out tommorow on Sunday!

~Jweezy~

[jakejkjaw]

100000000000000/10

aWESOME!!!!! I CANT WAIT!!

[pokemonfan71]

cool im gonna look for part three today is sunday!

[Jweezy]

Part three is out...go read it!!

~Jweezy~

[Lunog]

I found out something. When you write a story, you should start another paragraph each time when a person is saying something. For example.

"Hello Mike" said Jake
"Hello Jake" said Mike
"Have you been to the mall?" Asked Jake

It shouldn't be like this.

"Hello Mike" said Jake. "Hello Jake" said Mike. "Have you been to the mall?" Asked Jake.

[Bobobo-bobo-bobo]

you spelled christopher wrong in one part it had no O