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05-09-2009, 06:03 PM
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Hnk999
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Money: 1,959 |  That's it, I can't take it anymore! Ugh, how do I describe this. I'll try through a poem: Hidden [I wrote this poem about a week ago.] Hidden behind a mask, I'm a stranger to myself. Hidden away, locked away, Crying tears that seem to have never been shed, Uttering words that seem to never have been said, Listening to my heart, but not doing the work, Crying inside, why didn't I listen? Crying inside, hidden behind a mask, Emotions hidden, words unsaid, tears unshed, And a voice without a use, Impossible, I wonder if they say, I'm impossible. Hard to live with at times, High emotions and shattering glass, Tempers lost and crying begun, Like the phases of the passing sun. Impossible, am I? Locked away, I am, Hidden behind a mask, that's the truth, Singing a song unheard, that's what I say. A singer without a voice is unheard, A person without a soul is unknown, The truth of these words unspoken, The truth of these words lost, The truth of these words unknown, The truth of these words so truthful, it's so. I'm the singer, the voice unheard, Only in my mind and in my soul, I'm the person without their soul, Only known in the darkness shown. Hidden behind a mask, I'm a stranger to myself, True and hidden, Quiet and cursed, Being locked behind the door, Nobody hears your cries, Nobody knows you, Nobody knows you exist, Hidden behind a mask, I'm a stranger to myself. Basically, that's how I feel and I can NOT take it anymore.
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05-09-2009, 06:07 PM
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Littlebit913
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Money: 57,737  |  Nice poem. You're a better poet than this one girl in my school. She writes the most emo stuff!! "I'm falling in a dark hole, no one try to save me" It's like, how emo can you get??? | ||||||||
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05-09-2009, 06:11 PM
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Hnk999
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Money: 1,959 | Yeah, I'm an awesome poet for my age. But basically, I try my best to be everything I am, but every time I try I can never find the courage to say it and it drives me insane. I hate it because people in real life basically really don't know me as much as they thought. Plus, because it is so hard for me to be me, I have VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY few close friends in real life. I have LOTS of acquaintances. I have two VERY close friends, one who is closer who is a girl and I met her in first grade, another is a boy who I met in K. I'm basically hating the situation I'm in... EDIT: And people REALLY need to reply.
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05-09-2009, 06:41 PM
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Money: 1,959 | It feels like I'll never get the problem solved. Oh, and that music by evanescence I listen to, I realised a while back that some of it kinda related to my situation.
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05-09-2009, 06:49 PM
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Chocolate123
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Money: 272,002 | We all are like that sometimes...i call it an emo day. Its a day where i sometimes compare myself to like a celebertity. Or my next door neighbor (who has a pool and a pwnage house) but then you have to think "wait...I'm ME and as pwnage as i'll ever be" then your like "well i can't be perfect here" and then youre all set. Nice poem btw | ||||||||
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05-09-2009, 06:54 PM
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Hnk999
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The problem is, it is not just an emo day. It is practically like I've lived a lie and didn't realise it until many a few months ago. I would think something in my head, want to say it, and I wouldn't. I'd keep my opinions to myself, not show what I truly think, I wouldn't stand up for what I believed in. Someone say something that makes me mad and all I'm doing is bottling that emotion up. Sometimes when I say something I can't control my tone of voice and it sounds cracky like I'm about to cry or like I'm mad at the person when I'm not. That is because of the things I mentioned above. Basically, I'm tired of it, I've done it for a long time, I want to be heard, I don't want to keep my emotions bottled up, but no matter what I do it NEVER works out. The only place where I don't do those things is on cp and cpc.
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05-09-2009, 07:10 PM
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Flor
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Money: 12,783 | I loved the poem! Great job, you've must of worked hard! I hope the bad things go away!
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05-09-2009, 07:13 PM
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Hnk999
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I hope so too! Oh and I didn't even work hard on it, it just flowed with my thoughts and the keyboard. Does anybody have any advice?
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